Into the Arena – Part 24
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March 2nd, 2009

Into the Arena – Part 24

My only thoughts with this page and the next were “How should Zenith react to the cops?”  So apparently he tries to ignore them at first, then ridicule them, and then hit on the hot one.  So… me when I’m in a bad mood, right there?  Huh.

Page jumps around a bit more than I’d like, and as a heads up the next one is only moderately better, but hopefully after that it can kinda level out.  I guess I was shooting for Zenith causing a general ruckus in all of his nonchalant glory, but I’m not sure I’ve necessarily succeeded…



  • Ragequit

    Actually, Zenith’s reaction came across quite well, to me it seemed that in panel three he reacted angrily because he didn’t het have a ‘witty retort’ to anything the cops might say. However, by panel five he’s cottoned onto what will make Fols flare up even further.

    He also might want to be careful, those electric nunchucks look like they’d hurt. 😛

  • Ragequit

    Actually, Zenith’s reaction came across quite well, to me it seemed that in panel three he reacted angrily because he didn’t het have a ‘witty retort’ to anything the cops might say. However, by panel five he’s cottoned onto what will make Fols flare up even further.

    He also might want to be careful, those electric nunchucks look like they’d hurt. 😛